MORE Ways to Add Details to Your Writing (2020)
Learn to write longer paragraphs!
This video lesson shows writers how to add important facts and details to a paragraph to make it longer and more cohesive.
We start with a simple paragraph and apply each of these revisions to make a revised paragraph that is longer, a higher reading level, more interesting, and tied more closely to the topic sentence:
*write a more inviting topic sentence that introduces what the reader will encounter in the rest of the paragraph
*entice the reader with background information
*add a definition to clarify and important term
*make relevant comparisons
*suggest inferences
*incorporate an inspiring, related quote
While this lesson focuses on helping writers compose longer paragraphs, in previous lesson I demonstrated how to write longer, more detailed sentences:
How to Add Details to Your Writing Tutorial (2019)
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