What NOT to do on the UC Personal Insight Questions (UC Application Essay)

Today I've got some tips for you about best practices for writing your Personal Insight Question Responses, which is the essay portion of the University of California Application for undergraduate students. I actually have a lot of videos on this topic in a playlist on my channel, check it out here! https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLfbDi5RiC4pKfJgwHqh1GmZoQh4LXPqB3 Here are a few pointers to help guide you through the writing process. There are some absolute "no's" that you want to know about. Avoid these things and craft the best essay that represents you! The point is to help the reader get to know you after all. I have firsthand experience with this - not only have I applied twice myself, but I have reviewed essays for other applicants and these are the common mistakes that I see. Good luck writing! About Me -Name: Hailey Dollar (yes, that's my real last name) -Age: 22 -CC: West Valley College, A.A. in Liberal Arts -Current School: UCLA -Major: Applied Linguistics Career goal: Speech Language Pathologist -Fun fact: I love astrology! I am an Aquarius sun sign with moon in Aries and rising in Sagittarius. Let's connect! https://instagram.com/haileyxdollar https://twitter.com/haileygoes2ucla Snapchat: @haileyddddd Disclaimer: I am NOT affiliated in any way with the University of California, California Community College or California State University, or the admissions departments of these institutions. The information presented in this video is taken from my own personal experience.