I Made a VOCALOID Song (NO EXPERIENCE)

If you're a music producer or you know anything about music, I just wanna say that I'm just a guy who's trying his best to make a VOCALOID song. Just let me know what do you think of the song in the comments down below! TOM TOM FACTORY (J-Pop Essential Chords Pack) : http://tomtomfactory.com BGM used in the video : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PvvaZaaHAm8 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f8nd8Fq90lU https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uySw78v2ZR0