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⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:
00:00 - I surveyed 367 readers
00:30 - Too many characters
02:05 - Meaningless action
06:07 - Prologues
10:37 - Dream sequences
13:17 - Made-up words
16:44 - Characters waking up
18:54 - Confusing setups
21:55 - Irrelevant characters/scenes
24:12 - Slow pacing
27:28 - Info-dumping